All Comments on 'Eva Down Under Ch. 05'

A most enjoyable read. An engaging pair of characters, and nicely written (and entirely lacking the grammar and vocab errors that one generally has to live with on this site). The ending was too abrupt, and I get the feeling that you could have produced a better--and longer--tale had you set out to put this story in the "romance" category.

itleaver me happy for tehm and very envious!

Would love to read more about Eva & Alfie