All Comments on 'Eva - Valentine's Edition'

You printed this story last year with a different ending.

This was supposed to be at the top of the story. I've no idea why it got cut out :(

Author's note:

I know some of you might think you've seen this before, but trust me, I re-wrote this story only because I could see it as a V-day one. Some of you might not like it, but hey, it's my work and I'm just experimenting at the moment. Please leave feedback if you liked it!

Even if you've read 'Eva' before, I've edited it quite a bit so don't think twice about reading it again.

Love,

Lily.

P.S. The original 'Eva' is still up(:

To the person who commented first that this was just reprinted but with a different ending, I don't think so. I don't think the first one was set at Valentine's Day and yes the ending was different. But so what this and the first Eva are great stories and you shouldn't be so upset for reading a great story.

i know i always say that but i loved this ending too... Im SO glad ur bac .. even if ur just 'experimenting' as u put it... v missed u Lily. Laxmy.

this version blows the original out of the water. I loved it! You truly have a gift with words.

I stayed up until 4am reading both version. Gotta say, loved both of them. Quick question though, um, when are you going to write a sequel to Alex??? I'm dying over here to find out what happens!!!! Grr, lol.

u know what.. ur a great writer.. an excellent one.. but it sucks that u alwayz keep ur readers hanging in the end.. i think u must improve on making your ending a good one,....

Lily, you're so gifted. Never stop writing. This is so beautiful, so well written. 10/10

In the end, any critic can say only "what I like." This story is a tale of the old school. If a writer's luncheon were given with joyce, Hemingway, and Fitzgerald invited, e.g. alia, there would be a place care marked for KillerRomance. [Please write and don't stop!)

I love this story!

I found only subtle differences between the two versions, and even though I read one straight after the other, I still enjoyed both.

My vote has to go for the first though.

As I previously said, I love it!

I, too, read them back-to-back. I thought the second version gave a good bit of background and preferred that one. And I'm curious about whether we'll get a sequel.

Love and trust ...... Hard to find easy to loose and building up again is nearly impossible ...... Hopefully you will give them a future liliy

💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝

... that I really enjoy the extended versions of your stories. It provides more background and depth.

5 Stars and my thanks.

Btw, I prefer "Chirp" as her pet's name. More fitting for a guinea pig.

I didn’t read the other version… but I loved this one! It would have been better if it were longer but I will take what I can get when it comes to your writing!