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by madnesshero

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
nice first effort

It was hot with good rhythm in the clinches &I pretty decent dialogue. Wish it was a bit longer and a little more structured with some conflict to be resolved. Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Mmm perfect for a quick read.... definately helped me cum as I played with myself, so I say keep them coming... ;) <3 -from a naughty girl

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Well-written, and very hot!

argeelogargeelogabout 6 years ago
Very good

Looking forward to more dtories from you.

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