by Sanzamour
There has to be a sequel to this what with him hand cuffed to the bed. Maybe fucking Monica and all of her friends.
... someone to proof-read, correct the punctuation and grammar and generally act as an Editor!!
Go to "Literotica"; "Index"; "Volunteer Editors"!
As this story stands I'd give it 3*.
If it had been better written it could have earned more!!
The other comments say it all.
My "favorite" was 'indefinitely' instead of 'inevitably'!
I gave it a 3 because I did not like the story stopping when it had just begun. When is the rest of it?