All Comments on 'Every Man's Fantasy Ch. 07'

I can't wait to see what happens when Ezra makes it to the mariners camp. I hope that Kalyndra's submission is for real and not just a ploy to manipulate him, but time will tell.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Hi Kaleb_Bartlett,

Thanks very much for your encouraging comments and support. I'm sorry I am so slow at writing at the moment but please bear with me.

I'm glad you're intrigued by the status of Kalyndra. It's not revealing much to say that she has a significant part to play in what happens next.

Best wishes,

Erinaceous.

I have really enjoyed this series. It's one of the best ones I have come across in quite some time. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Please keep going with this story. Nice interesting read with good characters.

A very well done introduction to both anal and submissive sex, worked into the story perfectly. Once again I am impressed by the way you are working the sex into the story instead of a series of sex scenes with varied partners.

Jason

Man, this chapter just ruined the story for me.

Everything seemed so artificial, drama induced for the sake of drama due to a lack of respect and communication. It cheapened the characters you were developing. Gonna drop the series here.

The machinations, twists and turns to this point are child's play to what is coming, and only in retrospect can I see just how many plans just now in beginning stages are dashed before the end.

This must have been one helluva flow-chart to organize lol

J

I do not read BDSM, nor Anal categories.

I do not even get why someone would want spanking -- giving or receiving.

So what was featured in this chapter -- sexually that is -- was not my thing and did not do much for me.

I understand that to hold interest, there needs to be variety -- especially in a long multi-chapter story. And that this variety will not always accord with my tastes.

Even though I wish the variety had been in a different direction,

since I am still intrigued with the adventure,

I awarded ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Paul in Oklahoma

Hmm, I know this story was posted years ago, but it didn’t need the bdsm and anal, they’re superfluous and don’t work in the context of the story as a whole (and I do read those categories fwiw), that said the political manoeuvring works and more of the story board is being revealed, so that worth celebrating! 5*