All Comments on 'Every Picture Tells a Story'

I cannot believe that's your first story. Really, really well done! If the size of the erection I have now is any indication, this is the hottest story on Literotica. I congratulate you on writing this wonderful story and having the courage to publish it. I'm sure I'll write more in private.

Blaine

I have to admit that this is one of the most unique stories I've read around here in quite a while. It's like reading a woman's diary, or better yet it's like being inside a woman's head while she lives her life. We think we know them, but women are a different breed all together.

I happen to be married to a woman fairly close in age to Marie here, and I know her, or at least think I do. What's she really thinking? The stuff the author is? Interesting. I don't know whether I like that or not though. I hope to see more stories from you. Best to you and thanks for a fun read. John.

Beautifully written. May I add my bravo too.

For a first effort, this is super. I clicked on it hoping it had something to do with Rod Stewart because of the title but instead got to read this erotic peice of work. For something with no real sex in it, it sure had something because I'm as hard as steel. I love the conversational tone of it. Just like you were talking to a friend off the cuff.

Please write more. You're good.

....this could have been a great story about a conflicted woman but it read like a manual for how to justify your bbc fantasy, albeit one couched in competent prose. So what's so great about gussying up a hackneyed plot???

brilliant fisrt story, love this from start to finish so very erotic love your discriptions and the fantasy of sucking a hugh black coock to a cumming.

This is Diane. I'm a friend of Blaine's over for a visit. He said you know who I am and that you write beautiful stories. This was sooooooo exciting I can see why he likes you. I'm writing from his ID because I'm still at his house getting ready to go home. You really write well.

I started reading one of your other stories. But having liked that one, I returned to the start of your submissions.

You do write well.

Ignore the critics, for it is easier to be critical than complimentary.

Don

So you cheat on your husband.

You like african crap from the butts of cretinous blacks.

So what?

Trash like you are a dome a dozen.

Clones of you are everywhere. Media told you to worship black dik so you worship it.

But you want more.

You want to be glorified for penis worship regardless of how hideous is the moron who is attached to it.

Literotica is the home of the queer and the land of female eunuch.

This was sent to me by someone who is not a fan, but it was so charming that I felt I had to share it....

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So Marie is just another cheating white middleaged slut/whore for BBC well I

guess they must be a dime a dozen around here. Blaine must be laughing his head

off at the way he can convince these women to cuckold their husbands. How little

love and respect or any other emotion excepts contempt these whore/sluts must

have. And there was the rest of us readers thinking Marie was a respectable

faithful 'loving' wife instead of a cheating slut/whore.

Just goes to show how wrong people can be doesn't it. What a sad and pathetic

story of a fucked up woman. Who shouldn't be married. A slut/whore yes no

problem with that if she wants to fuck around at her age, fine have at it, fuck

as many people as the old ho wants to, but stay married? No, there is no point

or logic to staying married.

You don't marry or stay married to whores and sluts you fuck them and leave

them, and if your black you leave them holding the little black bastard. Well we

can hope.

Isn't that right Marie?

best story i have read great work

your story was very good and about the same thing happened to me as well, but then i was not able to escape the back seat with my very young lover who was able to get on top of me.