All Comments on 'Evolution Ch. 02'

Is this back story or a continuation from the first part?

Although this is well written grammatically, it appears to all over the place.

There is no mention of his wife or the transformation he went through in chapter one.

Also in chapter one there is no mention of his children.

I agree with first commenter. What did this have to do with part one? It's not a sequel and it sucked to boot. It was just a gay dalliance

I'm not getting this. Doesn't appear to be a true second part to the first story of this name. Is it supposed to be, or is it completely different?

what did I just read?

i dont care if it is part 1 or part 2 or even if it follows on from anything ,i enjoyed it and i would love it if you develope it further , i would love to hear more of your submission .x

Because it doesn't follow.

I am a cross dressing sissy bitch witch loves bondage and cocks.My master is willing to keep me in bondage and use me as he wants.He wraps me ties me and straps me t his breding bench for fucking me and to have me suck his big black cock.He has bound me head to toe hung me up side and fucked my mouth,He hangs me hands tied to my angles and lets his friends face fuck me and butt at the same time.This boudage can and has gone on for hours.I have been bound and left bound with didlos in my mouth and butt for hours at a time.