All Comments on 'Ex "Q" Me! Ch. 02'

Your story was reviewed this morning and will be mentioned on the New Story Review Thread, found on Lit.'s Bulletin Board found in the Author's Hangout forum. ~ Thanks Red

I feel like I've just overheard somebody telling a story in a hallway. It's kind of interesting, but it's not particularly erotic.

You know, there is such a thing as trying to write too many stories all at one time. Why don't you slow down and take your time writing one really good story instead of several hurried stories?

say what?

Doesn't this character Q have a name? Such a strange weird little story. Coming from no where, going no where?