All Comments on 'Executive Platinum Ch. 01'

Great Story... !!

Great start to what promises to be an entertaining series.

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So far so good. Looking forward to reading the rest. Only, I can't see the characters, just yet.

Not "mail", I do know better.

Just read what another commenter had said about making Jim "more dastardly". There's plenty of that on Literotica, but there are many of us who like a "just plain nice guy". Look elsewhere if you want the main mail character to be a prick.

Hey, Ben, I hope this story will be as enjoyable as Deja Vu. I already like the characters, can't wait to see what will become of them. Gary

Can't wait to read chapter 2

I like the patience...Good development of character.

Like the story so far. How about making the male character a little less knightly and a lot more dastardly. At least let him take advantage of the situation when she calls, and she will call won't she?