by RandomAuthor
I enjoyed this chapter very much. Looking forward to Ch . 2 (and more I hope)
This is so close to a fantasy I've had for so long, it's not even funny. Except in my fantasy, the male doctor undresses me and makes me expose myself during my appointment. Very nice story, it got me thinkng again.
Awesome....... Just the right amount of sexual tension and then release, the lead up to this being a multiple part story I just cant wait to read.
Please hurry
this story is awesome , well written and structured :)
Cant wait for part two
Thanks
This one too, begs to be finished, and finished soon! (Before I forget it and have to re-read it!) You are good at doing the descriptions of the activities and I respect that a lot. Keep up the good ...no, ... EXCELLENT work!
Good writing and pacing, just a ridiculous premise
PLEASE CONTINUE STORY SOON. BEFORE MY MIND BLOWS UP TRYING TO FIGURE OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. AND AT NEXT DOCTOR VISIT. LOVED IT!!!!
Please do continue !! is just so sweet.. and so sexy and so wonderful... nice build up!!
Like other coments I liked the story and hope to seee you expand on it. Show some of the things Rob does to help her.
I so enjoyed reading the stroy so far that I do hope more is going to be posted soon.
This story was the best I have ever seen in the Taboo section please give us a Ch 02.
Can't wait to read the next chapter when they get home.
Excellent story, Thanks!
I'd love to find a doctor who instructed me to undress my little sister.
Are they in the yellow pages? Very well written with nice build up. Can't wait to read the second installment.
Please keep the writing up and give us a second Chapter your good
The first chapter in what I hope is a much longer tale.
Suggestion--"pique," not "peak" and "faze," not "phase."
I was adjusting my cock half way through the story and almost had an accidental ejaculation before finishing the last paragraphs. Very well written, nice lead in. All of your stories are very well done, but this one will be exceptional. Please post the next chapter soon.
Love the story. Let Cassie keep the bush! It's hot in this story and would be great to expose to others.
Wow, not my cup of tea, so to speak, but still an erotic story. Trim her hair some but not all at first. Maybe later in another chapter. And, when is the next chapter coming out?
I had to stop reading when I got to the line about "compulsory exhibitionist." I was laughing too hard to continue. I don't think compulsory is the word you were looking for. Compulsive, maybe?
Pretty good story. I'd like to see what direction you take it in. Please put up more.
RandomAuthor has come up with a different kind of story than is usually encountered in this genre. By combining exhibitionism with submissiveness in a brother-sister incest situation, what results is a story that will be interesting to follow as future episodes are published. Anyone who enjoys this genre of stories will truly enjoy this story.
I love it. I hope ch2 is done and I can read it. I have to find out how the next phase if little sister turns out. great story.
I think there is a lot of room for more adventures, and I would love to read about them. Great story!!!
Holy shit this story was hot! While the thing with the therapist was a definite stretch from an ethical standpoint, that part was completely blown away by the rest of it. Loved the 'soft-Dom' interplay between the older brother and the younger sister. It's so much better to punish out of love than the desire to harm for its own sake.
I really loved this story, but where is the next chapter???? I have been looking and I'm not having any luck at all :(
This was so amazing and sweet and I just need another chapter, please another chapter. Rob is just the sweetest, everyone should have a brother that loves them that much. Please write more.
I like the story telling, it was sexy with a different edge to it.. Please continue the story ASAP.... Very good and the dialogue was excellent.. One of the best I've read on this site.. Keep up the good work and get chapter 2 written. It's a 5 star story
Looking forward to future episodes on this story, thank you very much.
Great story add a more chapters please add more fucking chapters, I was on the edge of my seat with this story,
Wonderful start, but many more chapters needed to explore this story! Please continue ASAP!!
I keep looking and looking but can't find Chapter 2!! WTW!?? Please tell me it's in final review before you release it TOMORROW!
Very good job, though it reminds me of another story here - ANOTHER favorite of mine!
Keep up the good work! (And FINISH CHAPTER TWO!!) ;-)
just trim it up neatly. grown women need pubic hair or they look like young girls. a neat bush looks a lot better than no bush.
A very gentle story, unique, and one that certainly deserved a Sequel. Thanx for the Read, and hope that you return to this special story again.
Great start but so disappointed that there isn't a second chapter as promised. Not sure if you do this on purpose or are just too busy to write the next chapters for your stories. Have to take away at least one star for telling us "To be continued..." and then not following up so we know if Cassie and Rob take it to the next step in her recovery.
I absolutely love this story please give us the next chapter ASAP. Can’t wait to read it
Another unbelievable story that would NEVER take place. It'd be fun to fantasize it though.
This a good fantasy story. It does not need to continue. A conclusion has been established; Rod and Cassie will have this brother - sister incestuous relationship till she has "recovered". I would title the next/last chapter "Cassie's Recovery". You can fantasize as to the text of the story.
Please find the time to continue this story. The readers here would so enjoy it. Thank you, in advance!