All Comments on 'Exorcising Brian Ch. 02'

I read the first part but never left a comment, I was hoping that you would continue this story & I am very pleased that you did . An excellent follow up to a very good story. I hope there will be a part 3, maybe even Paula find herself pregnant again after that afternoon ............

I can only echo the previous comments. Part 1 was very, very good and Part 2 was great. I also hope there is a Part 3.

god,.. that was a very powerful story for me...so many metaphors for my own life - thank you!

What a beautiful story, brought tears to my eyes!

It was delightful. Your words are well chosen, but you gave the ending away. I had a feeling but I was surprised at the gender. It was nice of her to acknowledge she was his. Sometimes it was a bit predictable. Lucky man to have been published in three years and he should have changed some of the details. Not only the names were changed but come on...

It was erotic couplings, but it was romance more so.

One of he great ones. To tug and pull at my emotions like that.

Paul in Oklahoma

I kept waiting for her to show him a child’s bedroom. My only complaint is that In a child’s house, there are signs of a child all over the house. The mother must have spent hours cleaning.

Otherwise, great story.

Saw it coming a mile away. Gave me watery eyes anyway. Bravo.

Okay, Your "Exorcising Brian" series goes on my favorites list. I do need to make one point and this doesn't take anything away from your story. But weren't Erica's eyes brown like Eric's not blue like Paula's? Still, this was a wonderful story, and thank you for publishing it here for us. Excellent 5 stars, again!!