All Comments on 'Experience Ch. 01'

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cricketxcricketxover 10 years ago
No sex but very very good

No sex but very very good. Exceptional dialog and moved at a very fine pace.

GrimsbainGrimsbainabout 12 years ago
Liked it so far...

I like this story so far even with no action in the first part. Looking forward to the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Good Start

A good start and I'm looking forward to the rest

bruce1971bruce1971about 12 years ago
Nice

Unique characters, a slow build, this is very promising!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Nice Start

You’re off to a great start; I look forward to that first liaison with Rita.

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