All Comments on 'Experimenting with Those Close to You'

by FriskyVirgin

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
poorly written

it was too jumpy and poorly written for me to understand what was happening and who was fucking who and such. it needs some serious editing and revision.

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