by JimBob44
It was nice to see Paula come around, and things for her and Terry to come around. On the whole I enjoyed the story as a whole. Thanks for sharing your words.
Wish it was longer but I love the story and thank god she didn't get married to sonny ... She came around at the end :) thank you for a great story
Had to suffer all that B.S. till the epilogue to get a smile on my face. The 5🌟 are the epilogue. Not the story.
I not only enjoyed Part 3 But 1 and 2 as well. The whole story was excellent reading.
Well written. Thanks
I've read all of your stories for this particular series. I thoroughly enjoyed it all. I just have this thought in my brain about Sonny. His change in behavior towards Terry over the business incident seemed too harsh and too quick. And he seemed to hold the grudge from left field. I don't know his character vibe from the beginning and towards the end had me feeling like they were two different characters. Had it been Micheal I think I could have believed it more but it just seemed out of character for Sonny. But hey your story just as I read that thought wouldn't stop bugging me.
Paula got her subservient pet back. And a dog as well.
Not up to your usual high standards. By the end of this, I really didn't care about any of the characters. They had none of the warmth or personality of your other characters. I didn't care what happened to anyone in this, which is a new experience when reading one of your stories.
Oh well, thanks anyway.
I like the way you write.
The racism is something else though.
Sincerely, a black lawyer from Africa
Honestly, love your story as always, but kinda wish terry found someone else, someone better. How Paula did her wasn’t right and she deserved a lot better than that in my opinion