by emittsrif
Very nice. Please add more chapters as this seems to have lots of ways to go. We want to hear all about this long hot summer. These two are off to a great start.
Very arousing story, especially taking the cum. I can remember taking a load for the first time...more please
I will continue to fan the flames, and wait patiently, especially if it yields such lusty rewards. I really enjoyed that story. Well done!
Masterfully written!
Very erotic & poetic.
Not pornographic although i did get a raging hard-on & my right testicle hurts.
I am bi curious and your story made me more curious than before!
Same happened to me reading this.Pre-cum oozing!!! Good stiff cock too
It took me much too long to re-discover this talented writer but this story makes it worth the. wait.
Beautifully descriptive !
Please don't wait so long for the next one
Wow that was a really sexy story. Very well written. I love it!
Kisses,
Tammy
Great story, it made me wish I was the one sucking Gary's cock. I hope there is another chapter coming.
I read this story before and felt like it deserved another read. I loved the story and would love to hear more about these two.
i love your story. The first time is always special. Can't wait to read your other stories.