All Comments on 'Eye of the Beholder'

Lovely story about people that were believable.

Loved the story and wish there were more writers like you.! Maybe you could come up with a few more.? Thanks.

The epilogue was a little disappointing, but quite logical, nonetheless. The story was lovely.

-- KK in Texas

left alone your starting this loving wives story with a wimpy male(?) giving way to the black lover. I never did figure out just why you would throw in a black lover except to start a series of complaints, it did not advance the story any futher than a male for a unfaithful wife for any race.

I found your story wonderful. The characters were superb, their humanity with small/no breasts and small penis just added to the reality, and it is reality that makes erotica so effective. And your level of anticipation added that much more to the arousal factor. Bottom line -- I have read this twice and cum both times. Many thanks.

A really good story! You developed the plot at a leisurely pace. The basic psychology of the characters was worked out well. You resisted the temptation to put them together forever, but still had a happy ending. Aside from all that, it is sexy.

Well done. Very natural.

One of the best I have ever read! Good development of a great truth, and proof that the idea of 'beauty is only skin deep' is only 'skin deep'. True beauty starts from within, goes all the way through, and is truly seen and appreciated in the eye of the beholder. Great story, excellent presentation. Thank you so much.

Nice and sexy read. Thanks for sharing.

Stunning! Excellent story with great characters and incredibly sexy. Thank you very much for sharing. I've rated it 5 stars only because there aren't more stars available. Please keep writing.