All Comments on 'Eye of the Beholder Ch. 06'

by Kundalinguini

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Little BirdLittle Birdabout 20 years ago
Woah!

Very strange story but... WOAH!!! Rarely seen something this erotic!

hongluobohongluoboabout 20 years ago
can this get any better??

the height of eroticism....

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 20 years ago
Definition

of erotic. You da man, Kundalinguini. This is so hot. Damn.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
fantasy

i came as many times as they both did. wish Sharon & her lady friend were here to WATCH---still horney----

RJalexRJalexover 13 years ago

FANTASTIC --I loved every word

tompo296tompo296over 11 years ago
Beautiful

I just loved this story..Leading from the voyueristic to the downright romantic. Absolutely brilliant, looking forward to see how the relationship develops. Defo 5*

whiteabsinthewhiteabsintheover 11 years ago
Congratulations

Excellent story, original, extremely erotic and well written, perfect pace...more please...

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