All Comments on 'F2: Spilling The Seed'

An interesting use of your ingredients, good job.

This was masterful in its execution and to be honest I'm a little jealous of the skill displayed here. Enjoyed this. Excellent writing.

An interesting take on the assignment. Would have liked to have seen it go deeper in the sex scenes while, at the same time, I was disconcerted on what seemed to be modern sex language couched in more oblique and flowery language of the rest fo the tale.

This story was written by NaokoSmith.