All Comments on 'Face of an Angel'

Wow.. dayummm..... i'd take care of her leg if I found her while camping... holy shit...Thats smokin' honey... Is there any continuation planned like later get togethers??

Great story. BUT, the one thing that would make this story even better would be, if you would add more to it hehehe. Tell us of the next camping trip with Kelly and Ellen...

Paul

It was a good story. Like the last comment I belive there could have been more. The one other thing, Gramer. forgeting a word or puting to words togather can be harmful to the story. but other wise well done. I will very much be looking forward to anything else you may wright.

it is full of typographical errors. Please get an editor if you have trouble with spelling and grammar; the mechanics of the writing kept me from fully enjoying the story