All Comments on 'Fag Hag'

I was unable to read the story fully because the story was unreadable. I compliment the author on plot and grit but think the whole thing needs to be reread, edited, polished, and spell checked. Come on author, get it together!

It seems to me that there may be a cute little story buried in there, however implausible it is. But it is completely lost in absolutely pathetic writing. Take a remedial course in sentence structure, learn something about homonyms, learn some more about sentence structure. And then take a refresher course in punctuation, crafting an understandable sentence, and paragraph construction.

-- KK in Texas

It strains credulity that any couple raising quadruplets is going to have a great sex life, but I guess that's why its a fantasy.