All Comments on 'Fair Play, A Second Time'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Fair Play, A Second Time

Could be a true story. So believable. Gorgeous story!

mzzqtmzzqtover 15 years ago
Utterly realistic!

I loved it. What an awesome tale, so comfortable and accepting of one another! Hope to hear more on the development of their relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
True Love

Again a very beautiful story about what True Love is, not just sex. The many ways of satisfying your lover is very important in any relationship. And the importance of wanting her to reach a special level was fantastic. You must continue with such a loving couple.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 15 years ago
I agree; This story is more about love than sex

With the intent of the author to put emphasis on love rather than just sex, and I enjoyed that, but sex is also important to a relationship. Since she has trouble having an orgasm, I would thought he would have tried oral sex to stimulate her to fulfillment. With a little alcohol and a well placed tongue and fingers, he could have brought her to the point where she could relax enough and let her body take care of itself. Thanks for the good story....Rich

LilacsAbloomLilacsAbloomalmost 13 years ago
Love Story

In response to digdaddyrich's comment, I'd like to say that I thought it was clear that her physical satisfaction was important to him. It can remove pressure and therefore increase pleasure for both to not have to focus on orgasm.

Wonderful tenderness and I appreciated their deep consideration for and appreciation for one another.

ZladyblueeyesZladyblueeyesover 10 years ago
Excellent

Wonderfully sensuous.

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Been busy lately, but will try to post some new ones. Thanks again for your constructive comments! ------------------------------------ I've written a fair bit of non-fiction before, but these are my first tries at fiction. So far, I'm having a blast with it! Thanks t...

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