All Comments on 'Faith, Friendship, and Passion Ch. 02'

And, hence, to authors who post such trash.

Good writing. Terribly sad story. Cheating is not condonable ,whatever the circumstances.Architect9669 you decided to make your characters suffer, and because they are likable and basically good, the reader also suffers. This type of

mundane hypocrisy is much too common.The wreckage of two marriages, the pain

for the children and extended families.This is why I gave you the 3* score.

You have not written anything special.

I can see your last chapter now A9669 they are discovered, and religious extremism

results in extreme punishment and/or suffering. On and on and on.

It seems to me your story isn't just about "Faith, Friendship, and Passion" . It is an

indictment of organized religion.

Did you have a bad experience?? It sure sounds like you did.

Anyway you have writing talent and I will continue to read.

Your Christian reader

AMerryMan

Yes please continue

thank you for writing

What a well written story you have submitted Thank you for that. It has drama, suspense, emotion and is a page turner. You are an excellent author

I see that you are a new writer on this site. There are a couple of things that you need to know. The quality of your story is not assessed by how well it is written but by how the non authors think it should be told. So you get a lot of moralizing and comments from people who won't write a story but will have other ideas as to how it should turn out. There is also the BTB camp that is probably psychopathic and can not relate to anyones pain. You are also pissing off some of the religious types and threatening their lifestyle. Also of course there is the redemption crowd who want it to have some sort of ending that may entail divorce but not bring harm to the lives of people and children involved. You can't keep everyone happy about stuff like that and if their moralizing doesn't agree with you, then they will in spite of how well your story is written punish you and give you 1's

The second thing you need to know, is that you are an excellent author who I hope puts our more work that we can enjoy but in order to do that you will have to have balls of steel taking hits from people who aren't smart enough to figure out that this is just fiction and only a made up story.

I would love to hear how this story plays out and see how you end it. Thank you for writing this story. You made my morning.

A cheater is time thif. He and she steal time from the other spouses. They steal that time which could be used by the betrayed spouse to find NEW MATE..............

1*

I'm surprised by the "high" scores ch 1 and ch2 has gotten thus far. I hate cheaters and cheating no matter what the reason. This is no better than JPB or Lynns stories.

Two loveless marriages two people in love. One husband a religious nut, we have to many of those on this planet . A wife who is fridged and unresponsive all because her parents brought her up to hate sex, witch by the way is natural part of life. So how do these two work it out. Remember till this day religion has killed more people in the name of god than anything .now they both deserve to be happy. I do not like cheaters bit in this case it may be an exception.

Religion and cheating. Both well done here. It could be justified and religion is a cult of taking people's minds and twisting the truth as they see it. Love thy neighbor, help those who cannot help themselves, stop all the killings .

Sucks a monkeys ass

This story is a mirror of a true life situation. Who are they to

Judge a cheater! Yea I don't care for cheating sluts or cheating womanizing husbands, however those who are in marriages that the spouse is an abuser or who just neglects their spouse then it's not BLACK and WHITE. I'm not a hypocrite, but I'm not perfect either!

I can see how Brad and Rebecca would have got together and personally how they fell in love. My true life story is quite different than this one however started out with NO INTENTION of committing adultery, it falls within the Same innocent path.

I would replay like to read more about these folks!

Well written and compassionately dialogued.

Loving these stories. Hope there is more to come. Thanx.

Yes please!

would love the 3rd chapter. well written

A pefectly written story. I am hoping that the rest of the story stays in reality without having to include some particular physical sex things this couple would obviously not do. Great job!!

I have faith that these two hypocrites will get caught and that the friendship between their families are destroyed forever and that finally the consequences of their so called passion "fuck fest" ends in them both having aids. Amen to that. Dont bother with another episode its god damn boring

Are you going to submit the third part? I loved the story, please do, I want to know how this ends so badly!

Clearly, these two love each other.

While I won't condone the cheating, I do think it's great they found each other.

During one of their successive times together, could see Rebecca telling Brad about her past.

As Brad poises his penis outside her pussy and prepares to enter her, he looks into her eyes, his arms holding himself up.

As he begins to move it in, she declares, "Brad, I was a naive virgin when I married him, who knows little about how to please a woman. You've showed me many things... Before I met him, I had several men try to talk me into going to bed with them and rob me of my innocence. I sometimes wish I'd done more thing with guys..."

As Brad thrusts deep into her sweet Christian pussy, he tells her he too was a virgin and how he always respected a Christian girl's morality & never pressed the women he dated for sex. His confession comes as he carnally pounds her repeatedly, seemingly never getting enough of her pussy, which she has completely surrendered to her.

She moans as his penis spasms and he makes his final thrusts, shooting more of his cum deep into her....

is hard to stomach. Both just cavorting in the flesh feeling justified by the way their spouses treat them. Wow, why not just get divorced and then explore your options? So unfair to the respectve spouses to have this emotional, physical affair without giving their spouses a chance to amend their ways.

@ Pair of Hypocrites

There was no friendship between the families. The religious nut would not permit this.... They do not go to his church.

Are you suggesting that he (the religious nut) is cheating? or that the frigid wife is getting some on the side? or do you believe that AIDS hits sinners out of a clear blue sky?

I knew where you intended to take this and enjoy both story and characters.

Thanks for sharing

I needed to see if you could improve any.on the chapter one farce. You absolutely did.not.