All Comments on 'Faith, Hope, Charity, and Cheating'

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Mother-in-law bad But two wrongs are wrong

How stupid is for having the lover over the house after her suspicions about her husband intervention on that Friday?

Good story line, but you have to get a proofreader. If this was translated for you, don't use them again. Grammar, punctuation, spelling, and a sentence that just makes sense. You are a good writer, with great potential, but if you want to write in English or American, you need help. Keep writing.

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Good story...hard to read at times.

Good story very believable

great story. I get you are not american so american english is most likely not your first language, but you did a great job there too. ( I'm american. and love seeing how other languages write in american english. Just like seeing a view point from someone else.)

Man was that boring.

Well told tale, the husband is a man not a loser, wife is a deluded slut, happy ending for husband, wife got what she deserved.

Slimeball cheats on his cheating wife Evidence eventually comes out of his cheating and court makes it 50 50 split Ex huband has to pony up the money he got by coersion His business tetter on bankruptcy wothout the extra money Slimeball marries slut he had sex with and she cheats on him The cycle never end

Good story. No way Tommy doesn't take Lisette's calls and starts up again with her at least for a while. He doesn't need to hide what he was doing from his ex-wife anymore. Plus, she has just come into some money after suing her mother. No, he stacks up with her again. Especially, since she is so eager to get with him again by making "many calls to desperately get ahold of Tommy.

What an absolutely amazing BTB (time two if you include the slut's mommy).

To all the idiots who complain about the man's quality of English - unless you are fluently bilingual and can write in a second language with quality exceeding this story, shut up. Hell, his writing is better than some native English spearkers' . And I had no problem understanding the story 100%, easily, despite not even being a native English speaker myself. You''re just whining because the cheating cunt didn't get her way and you hate men.

Liked the story, a lot but yours was one too many where the guy has a happy ending with an old flame.

Other than that, it was great!

Well written all things considered; an editor will help with the small things. My main criticism is the transition of events. Ex. - Man and wife were in their kitchen discussing the divorce and what not, then suddenly, he's with Lottie and she's telling him what she doesn't want from his house. There wasn't much of a conclusion to their discussion, nor a lead up to his new discussion with Lottie. Other than that, it was a decent read.

3 stars.

I really like the plot, however, i'm not a fan of the way it was told. It's almost purely a narration. Even when the MC is engaged in a dialogue, It comes off as droning/ orating.

It prevented me from immersing in the story.

Still, thank you for sharing!

Way too much repetitious dialog..the story flowed and ebbed weirdly as other stories of yours do,not in a natural way..I guess the best way to put it is it seemed dictated..

Very scandi. Quite a good story, not so sure I can side with the MC as he was far too passive in his treatment of both his MiL and wife. The ending gave the impression that his love was as fleeting as it was self serving.