by 1Thinkingman
The Guy was made a Cuck by His wife .. Where were his friends to tell him what She had Done . Why Didn't She tell him ?? Some Faithful Wife he Had ..
I was into it but once it clicked that it was some kind of anti-monogamy universe I lost any interest not to mention erection. Weird ass story but to each his own
LULZ!!!!!
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When the lawyer said it was a clear-cut 'fidelity' case, I knew!
I could tell from the first half of the story that this couple weren’t communicating with each other. The husband had a major issue, and instead of bringing it up and talking about it, just kept waiting for his wife to take the lead. Instead of opening his mouth and digging into the issue, he goes and hires investigators.
This was never a marriage, this was two people living in the same house. If you don’t communicate about important things, you cannot be on the same page. If you were not on the same page you are not a married couple, you are simply two roommates.
The lack of communication appears to me to be a plot device that allows the husband to pull a “gotcha” on the wife, which many of the readers on this site seem to demand. Too bad it ruins the story, at least for me.
Perhaps the worst, most stupid story I have read. I've enjoyed your stories that I've read, even your quirky way of writing is entertaining but this???? I suppose you were aiming at funny but you missed the mark. Sort of like a Mel Brooks comedy.
Author wrote only 8 stories. There were 7 good ones, and this total waste. That’s a decent percentage.
Well I guess there is always a first for everything.
But what a sick and twisted tale.
0 points from me
I don't know why this story does not have higher marks. As a parody of so many stories here, it's unique and clever.
Yikes! I'm upset because I read the whole damn thing, and just couldn't believe what I was reading. Barf! Puke! Toss my cookies!
the question that springs to mind if his wasn't fuckung other men was she a lesbian or at the very least she is bisexual, otherwise why go to all the bother of faking an affair with other men, very confusing story sadiex
A good send-up of the standard LW fare, and a twist so well hidden that 2/3 of the commenters never got it. That has to add up to 5*.