All Comments on 'Faithfuly Yours'

She has no concept on what love really is. It's all about herself. She tries to convince herself that she loves him, you don't cuckold someone you love.

Lovely. A nice turnaround a view of society in which taking the vows means you HAVE to cuckold your husband to show that love. The letter at the end is her Dear John equivalent. It's difficult to see how such a society might have reached this point ( as marriage is at least in part about proving parentage) but once it has his reactions are quite rational.

I love the idea that she has been ruined by her husband for other men and so is incapable of cuckolding him - much to HIS sadness and bitterness - is again a great reversal of the usual form.

And Amber, I think you missed the point.

some one should have counseling. TK U MLJ LV NV

death would be the only way out, I gave it a 3 because it was so damn stupid it was funny.

"sorted" - how one describes a file that has been put into a sequence, such as alphabetical by name

"sordid" - morally ignoble or base

I've seen that mistake several times in the last week. I'm not the word police, but geez, do a little bit of editing.

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I give kudos for attempting to turn the LW category around. We need more efforts to do something original to a tired old genre.

That being said, this one was rather obvious and was about a page too long. I got it as soon as the tape conversation was explained.

This is one story that would have been improved by reduction. A lot of stories don't explain enough. This explained too much.

To Amboy, You need to reread the story, She did't want other men . He wanted her to have other men, It was in the marriage vows.

Really funny and creative. Built the tension like a standard LW/cheating story, then had the pay-off. Well done in conception and execution.

I don't think I've ever read such bullshit in my life. You should have kept the story hidden away. To be a willing cuckold is worse than dying of flesh eating bacteria.

You're a sick man, under two different names.

HA

I hope you are not married.

I suggest you "quite" writing, because your writing is quite "sorted".

Seriously, this passed through an editor?

I can't believe that 'frequent commenters' do NOT understand that this is an 'inverse' cuckold story. It was very nicely (except for common misspellings, already 'sited'-sic) crafted to sound like a garden-variety cheating-wife story, until the end!

I do not understand this story. Is it a satyra?

Between satyra and good satyra there is differece...............

No, I understood perfectly it was trying to be a reverse cuckold story. The problem is, it's still a shitty reverse cuckold story. It's too heavy handed as satire or farce. An experiment, but in the end a failed experiment.

FrancisMacomber has an excellent satyra "The Stairway to Heaven" and that I undestood well for first reading, but I have to reread some parts to discover this is a satyra....

...it would be just bad. As is, it's absolutely horrible.

I would have left her too

bizzarro world

it is a very twisted turn on reality

From the same problem it did when you submitted it the first time: it is way too long a story for a single, feeble joke — which isn't actually very funny. It didn't work as humor & satire, and it is even less worthwhile as a LW story. Maybe you thought that if more people read your story they would like it better?

There have been some excellent satires on the LW genre, and perhaps you should read a couple of them.

they did one like it only the people were ugly and the one that was beautiful thought she was the ugly one. sort of a crazy story here - quirky. i like quirky. i do quirky myself. will look to see if you have anything else.

Well, you did try something a little different from the normal cuckold story that appears on this site, so well done for that. Thanks for writing.

Good try. Keep writing.

I've seen other stories were the whole thing was built toward a punch line. Not horrible but not too deep.

Humor is hard to write. But it's even harder in the LW world where most folks take their cheaing deadly seriously.

You've got potential.

...do these gnats have such short attention spans? This worked fine and a page and a half ain't much folks.

I can see why it didn't do well in humor & satire, stupid can be funny, but this isn't funny. It's kind of stupid, but it's not funny.

Ah well maybe next time.

Read.

goes on for like 7 minutes. It's hilarious. Not putting this on that level, but I thought it was pretty good. Not great comedy, but a worthy one-note original piece, imho. I could see it made funnier, but I think it wasn't meant to be too funny. It explores pride, and social mores in a counter-intuitive way. In that, i thought it was successful. Could have been more gripping, more funny, or more sexy, but that is an author's choice.

Anon-what LW stories are you referring to?

Nice try, though.

or at least on sex life. The twist was unusual and well written. I've put it in the category of satire in my thinking, it certainly didn't fit in any other category.

When I first posted this story I put it in satire. The reader's who don't read LW stories did not get it. It is a mirror of the world we live in. Where faithfulness is shunned. It is a satirical look at the other side. If you didn't like it well ok, if you didn't get it that is the author's failure. It is a hard subject; infidelity and it is no joking matter to those who read LW stories. I get that and the scores will show it. I will state I am not a cuck though I have divorced for intidelity. My revenge was to never interact with my ex. Not harsh enough you say, it is what the law allows and she was not worth going to prison for.

predictable results (stone cold cucks lambasting/not understanding - regular folks chuckling). The failure of the piece is not in the writing but the submitting: the LW cat is only for "beaten cuckolds who crave revenge." Period. End of story.

The myriad spelling and grammatical errors are of no consequence (as evidenced by the high praise of incomprehensible scribbling so often submitted) so the single relevant criteria left in LW is adherence to a formula of "wimp gets cucked, runs away, obtains revenge."

There is a reason so many talented, insightful, coherent, and humorous authors stopped posting in this category. Legions of illiterate cuckolds coagulated in LW to share their pain and relive their bitter treatment over and over in stories and comments. This is their free therapy. Or circle jerk, whichever you find more appropriate.

@ Dear Author a good satire is humorous and the reader can laugh on it. This story is sad with minimum level humor. The concept was good, but humor and humor can help the good satire. FrancisMacomber's satire "The Stairway to Heaven" is such a story, when I started reading I keep laughing from the begining..........

I liked the idea of turning convention on its head. The sort of mariage that might exist in huxley's Brave new world. I found it a little confusing in places but that was because it wasn't always immediately obvious who was saying what.

No there were no laughs in it but the humour was in the reversal of convention.

ridiculous bit of satire. hard to believe people didnt get it when he was mad she was faithful.

i appreciated it anyway.

Maybe I am wired wrong but I found this story awesomely hysterical! I laughed for five minutes straight. Thanks for making my night!

I see from the comments that others seem to understand it. However, it makes no sense to me; therefore, 1*.

What. The. Fuck!

Now that you've revealed that you are a psychologist it all makes sense. You fuckers are without any.....(sense).

Interesting "Twisted" story...I enjoyed it

Nothing erotic about this piece of "dreck".

You can't be fucking serious you pathetic excuse for a man, divorce because she DIDN'T cheat? You are one sick fucker and for a so called educated man you clearly didn't pass anything because of your writing skill.

The wife was faithful and the dumb-ass husband has proof and yet he still divorces her because the shits for brians people at his work think otherwise?

should have been

By the time, I had returned from cleaning myself in the bathroom ! What did he do shit him self ?

I drove home in silence ! What does he normally do talk to himself?

Your story was funny because of the non-cuckold, but sad because a husband and wife had to part. The unique ending, too funny.

The folks with negative comments can't tell this is satire.

WTG good job

This should have been sent to the "recycle bin" of your PC, and then been deleted.

now she can go slut around without hurting her husband. I wouldnt fuck her or have a relationship with a woman like that they are only good for being whores.

Damn shame so many people don't get the world you created in this!!! Wow, funny as all hell. LOVE IT!!! Hilarious. You need to make another! I'm still laughing.

Sorry. I read it twice. It just doesn't flow together the way good satire does, or else I'm one of the clueless ones out there that just didn't get it. But I didn't so I gave it a "1".

This is best example of a story the r\commenter never even read it is not funny - the anon below calls her a whore who can now go out and fuck whoever she wants???? Get a grip a whole the whole damn premise of the story is the she DID NOT fuck around moron -

I loved the perspective and it only just started to come out when the lawyer said it was a fidelity case and SHE would rake you over the coals - it was that contradiction in terms that planted the seed - AWESOME

A world where infidelity is the RULE - perfect

I don't get it...

...not betraying him and still hope to stay married? He should have known that she couldn´t be the whorish slut he expected her to be. She obviously violated their marriage vows to be unfaithful. I realize that in not becoming a cuckold he couldn´t continue working.

She should have told him before the wedding that she intended to be faithfúl...

I pity that poor man, being punished with a faithful wife...lool

she will, she wont or she didn't, TK U MLJ LV NV

Her wedding vows was that she would be a highly unfaithful tramp.

This is a purely humor piece for all those that don't get it. He is divorcing her because she WON'T cheat on him.

At first I was like WTF But now I can't keep from laughing my fool head off. XD

This was the Twilight Zone of Loving Wives where men WANT to be cuckolded and divorce their wives for NOT cuckolding them! In a fucked up world where men not only expect to be cuckolded, but DEMAND that their wives cuckold them, one wife stands up for what's right and gets Divorced for it.

@Monkcalm

I think you failed to comprehend the satire in this tale. She REFUSED to cuck him even though he wanted her to, and he divorced her because she loved him too much to cuck him. Like a twisted mirror to our own reality. I recommend you read it again, all the way through.

5 HUGE Stars for the twisted laughs.

he should be locked up for stupidity.

1T, you need help. You know, the shrink type. Story sucks. Cheers!

Meh execution.

I loved it!

on opposite day.

While I enjoyed the story, I was going to knock off one star for the "sorted/sordid" and other errors, since in a tale where the change in one word can change the entire meaning of the story, exact usage is most important. For example, using "fidelity" not "infidelity" as the basis for divorce in this bizarre world you created. You created a high burden on yourself to use very accurate language, so I was going to drop down one star. ( I'm not a strong grammar Nazi, but this tale requires great precision in language to work.)

But then I read the comments of the great unwashed semi literate horde who don't understand satire. So to make up for them, I gave you five stars.

So stupid I can't believe it. So much for a visit to bizarro world.

Had to give you 5 stars I hit the end of the story and I was laughing hard

Hysterical! Never saw it coming. I see now why it's hard to place this story; there's no loving satirical wives category. Watch out HDK!

All cheating slut suddenly become faithful virgins after they are caught?

5* for warped reality!

That woman wouldn't even disrespect him so he could virtue signal.

It just goes to show the stupidity of the cuckold lifestyle, that even as a JOKE, we can't imagine a society where a husband would divorce his wife for NOT cuckolding him, and would be humiliated by it.

No, I don't see this story as a joke.

This is a satire.

I'm with sbrooks, that cuckolding

is not funny.

When you think about it,

sex, in all it's variations, isn't funny.

It isn't sopposed to be.

But this story made me laugh.

Maybe I have a twisted humour, lol.

When an ex girlfriend told me

she lost her virginity in a car,

while the radio played

George Harrison's "My Sweet Lord",

I just lost it.

Couldn't stop laughing.

I'm sure she regretted telling me

that story, lol.

So with my twisted humour

and the originality of this story,

I give it top ratings.

On her for being faithful! Who'd ever thought hey, she got divorced for being faithful.

I run out of things to say! That's my comment. 5 ★ WOOF! Oh Oh Oh! Jerry Springer would have loved this? JERRY! JERRY! JERRY! ( I can't help myself) See Ya!

Just dumb.

What made you write this stupid story?

Wrong category.

...err.....what the fuck did I just read!?

Epitaph

I must be losing it or reading far too much Literotica hadn't a clue what was going on

This piece of whatever...is like a really bad joke that when told just lays there and dies and everyone walks away shaking their head!

I have no idea what I read, but if the 'cuck shit' Anon were around, I'd be pointing to his post right about now. Thinkingman has one hell of a job thinking without a fucking brain. What a cuck!

that's all I have to say

Really do not have a clue what you were attempting to say. Glad it wasn't several chapters!!!!

This is hilarious. A clever inversion of the the usual cheating story. Bravo

Alice! What a waste of time this piece of shit was and is! By the way did all of the writers on literotica go to the same school or are all your teachers morons? The word quiet is not spelled quite...yes it has all the same letters but it is not quite the same word!! Never mind all the other mistakes but quiettakes a hammering in these stories! Kinda like cloths instead of clothes!

Can't recognize a satire. If you have a brain, you'll be amused

Looks like all the Literotica authors are awful here lately! Maybe it's time to shut it down! I've been very disappointed with the last five stories. Think I'm done with this silly crap!

Yeah, I know. It's "satire". I see what you were trying to do, but you fell well short. I didn't find it clever or funny, but simple, boorish. Less like satire and more like telling political jokes at the corporate Christmas party.

By the way: it might've been more clever if your grammar wasn't so horrible... but I doubt it.

Hmmmm, satire. Sure, if the author actually understands the meaning and has the talent to pull it off. That's obviously not the case here.

I enjoy good satire, and I like to think I recognize satire when I read it. I did.not recognize this as anything resembling satire.

I read it once before, but I did not recognize it. It snuck up on me. That was good fun and a well-written bit of misdirection. Thanks.

I get where he was going with his satire, but can't get my head around it. The story's not great nor horrible. I'll give it a three which surprisingly may bring the score up.

Nice switch, laughed my but off.

Society like that I would have to take up circumcision and cut off a lot each time

Liked most of them,.but you can keep this one. Not funny at all.

Wtf... This was a joke of a story. It did NOTHING but frustrate. This is not a LW story, wrong section here. This is 1 star but should not be that high.

I MUST BE REALLY STUPID BUT I CAN'T FIGURE OUT WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED IN THIS STORY? I'M SO CONFUSED I CAN'T EVEN OFFER UP A REASONABLE QUESTION.

Need a category for those stores

Ie. Willing cucks

Unknowing ones who take appropriate action immediately okay

WTF happened, does anyone know.

1/5

OMG what a great story! I never thought of a world were cuckolding was the norm this is a great twist.

Loved It!

Fucking stupid crap. 'Nuff said.

i guess this is probably more real life but sometimes their needs to be more btb