All Comments on 'Fall of '69'

This was a great story. I'd like to know the outcome, because you have me liking the couple a lot.

Wonderful love story but should be in non-erotic.

Wonderful, I admire your style and sence of humor. Can't wait to read more about these two young lovers.

truly a well developed story and it deserves a second helping I do hope you will be continuing this story I would love to hear how they made it through the seventies

Great story thus far.

I would like to see how you develop it further.

Please continue the growth of both characters.

I found myself far more interested in the story itself then the sexual content. Really quite good. You should develop the story further.

this was fantastic - great character development - i was hooked - can't wait to see their relationship unfold - keep writing please!

Exceptional - in a word. And a perfect ending for those who have imagination.<P>

Author - you are appreciated and now looked forward to if this is a sample of the credible work your standards call for.<P>

With High Regard

What an absolutely wonderful story, with great character development and a beautiful soft, "what next" touch.

Even reminded me of my own personal relationships in those turbulent anti-war years.

Thank you and please do follow ups on this story!USA

Poignant and tender, marvelously told. Thank you.

This is one of the best stories I have read here.

I enjoy the slower pace of the relationship.

I can't wait to see. Please don't wait too long

in posting more.

Very enjoyable reading experience. I echo others and hope you follow up on this story.

Boyd

Like others it takes me back to my own summer of love. Please develope the story and caracters more. The first story content I have enjoyed as much or more than the sex.

Like what the others said, it's a wonderful story. It may not be very sexual in content but the plot more than compensates for it. Makes me remember 60s and 70s movies, and also Forrest Gump (I hope you don't mind!) I even played some 60s music while reading it to get me 'in the mood'. Please continue the story! -CA

This is a great erotic story. It builds and leaves the reader wanting more. 1969 was a great year -- men walked on the moon -- and it was the year my wife and I were married. The portrayal of Rebecca reminds me of my wife's personality.

It brings back a lot of memories. Oh to be youthful again.

I certainly hope there is a sequal planned. I really got caught up in the story and would like to read more. It was wholesome and innocent yet with an erotic hook.

I picked this story anticipating a sex driven one. Instead, it was a romance planted as a seed and grew into full blossom. I was impressed with the after thoughts of DC, which helped understancter. Thstory took me down a different path almost forgetting the main reason why I read these stories. It's a path I most truly enjoyed. You must follow up on this story. Not doing so would be like leaving a guy with a hard-on.

The best story I have ever read on Lit. PLEASE add more chapters.

Beautifully written, I envy that type of eloquence in writing. I loved that unlike other stories I've read, you didn't skip out on character development at all, and that made your story so much more compelling. You really brought their characters to life, and your description of the way interact with each other, their thoughts, their desires and their personalities was skillful. Watching Don and Becky change bit by bit throughout the story was almost as much of a reward for me as the smolderingly arousing sex scenes. Those were very sensual, very erotic, and an enormous turn on for me.  The lust and the "unbridled" passion, combined with the softer themes of romantic attraction and young, flirtatious courtship really mixed well to create one of the best stories I've read on here. It's definitely got to be in my Top Fifteen. Superior job, and thank you for writing such an excellent story.

Great writing.