All Comments on 'Falling Hard Ch. 01'

I want to read what happens next, does she fall or is she punished in other ways? Give us more, PLEASE.

You know what I think? I think this is the most creative and original story ever written on this site that I've ever read. It's simply refreshing! I think this will really turn out to be a real fun read. Naught angel? Who would have thought of that? And using computers in heaven? That was just so original. Gotta give two thumbs up to the author!

definetly something unique. Do continue!

Angels are always an intriguing premise but placing them in a sterile labyrinthine heavenly bureaucracy is a nice twist.

Can't wait to see what happens next; thanks.

Tarot

"Why is god so damn insecure?"

I like where this story is going.

I'm an athiest, and this still sounds interesting.