All Comments on 'Falling Hard Ch. 11'

Somebody screammmmmmmmm! Politics in Heaven. Who would have thought?! Great story! Can't help but to love the way you write it! Imaginative as I've said before and I will say it again. More! More! More!

I'm really enjoying this story and can't wait for more. Love the bureaucracy in heaven. :)

LOVE IT LOVE IT!!! But hate cliff hangers! This story is AWESOME.... Please write more soon!!!

This story is so well written and has such a great detailed back story. I love Virta and her world. If I had to pick the best story I've read on Literotica, it would be Falling Hard. I can't wait to see how it turns out!

LOVE the story so far! Athan is one hot as hell demon who could show up in my heaven any time...

You're going to explain why Mick and all the others were just pretending to be Virta's friends, right?

Oh my God -- hurry and please post the next chapter soon!

YOU HAVE TO WRITE A NEW CHAPTER! ASAP! OMG. IT'S SO AMAZING! CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!

Good for Virta, but hoping nothing bad is gonna happen and that she hasn't misplaced her trust.