All Comments on 'Family Fire Ch. 01'

by stevie3624

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tjreadertjreaderabout 2 years ago

I know it's too late, but the axiom "show don't tell" came to mind a lot during this story. You described some dialog instead of just writing the dialog and letting it speak for itself. 3/5⭐⭐⭐

LilhellLilhellalmost 15 years ago
Great series

Just finish with the first part and love it.

Cant wait to read the rest

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