by tenken
This was kind of lousy.
What girl immediately goes down on a guy with no apprehension?
& 8 " is so trite...
Interesting premise and action, but please write in a consistence verb tense, either past-tense or present-tense, but you are often switching between tenses, even within one sentence. This story would lend itself better to being fully written in past-tense.
This story was VERY HOT even if unrealistic, but it's fantasy so enjoy! It drained my balls into my cum-hungry mouth a couple of times.
Obviously written by a teen ager, no idea what sex is really like! 1 star
My name is Kathy and I'm 19 lol. I know its not a huge coincidence but still.
Cocksucking, cum swallowing , ass fucking and cunt licking. Everything I love.
I never read a story with so much cumming going on. It seemed like everyone got off about a half dozen times. I added a couple of my own while reading this hot story.
You won't believe this, but the EXACT same thing happend to me, except my sister has big tits and i have a giant cock. Anyway, the aliens didn't show up until the next day, and then it was vampires and zombies the day after that. By the way, you gettin' any?
P.S. If you want reality, you might be in the wrong place, try TV land. Peace, Bro!
max052
A bit unbelievable but very hot. Please continue, add some neighbors or the daughters boyfriend and his parents at a dinner at the house. Bi-sex incest is great!
What a story. Totally unbelievable. Sister walks in starts suckin his dick like a whore, then they get caught, and mom and dada are so devoid of morals, that they just jump right in. And people think this story is good? Where are the aliens, because this story has no realism. The action was hot, but not believable.
This was a horrible story. Give me back the ten minutes of my life you stold.
I have 4 sisters and a mom. No dad, so I don't have to worry about the gay shit.
This was a very engrosing story, both literally and figuratively, considering that it involves all the family members. It works the imagination with both fantasy and imagery. Keep the stories coming. Thank you.
I was really liking this story until the father son at the end. (Not my cup of tea at all.)
But you have put together a very good story and definitely have some talent so keep up the writing.
I have never read a story as great as this one. I wish this would happen with my family. Tons of action. A family fuckfest at it best. I was thrilled to see that nothing was held back. Dad and Son action is most of the time held back. I'm glad to see that this family loving was a true family love making. Great Story. Please continue to write more like this one.