All Comments on 'Family Fun'

A good author writing a story that describes every man's dream to a "T." Thank You. Ronnie W.

JANAMARIE once again arouses and keeps us aroused! Well written vivid erotic story! I loved it!

At first I was a bit skeptical about the incest theme but Janamarie made it work and then some. There's enough hot sex here for several stories and many a fantasy.

Well done!

Janamarie ... A delicious taste of more than one of my dreams! You are a wonderful writer, and a wordsmith beyond any others I've read in here. A wee bit of nit picking: When Nick was putting it in Jeanne too far for her to take, he "pulled all the way out" Then the next sentence had him already in a few inches. Damn, I had to hunt for something, and it was hard to find. LOL

This was one of your best. Loved reading it. Please write more like this very hot and sexy. Only wish I had been Nick. Lucky man!!

More please.

Mike NZ

your writing style is just out of this world - star studded.

Seldom do I read a story where all participants are happy, pleasant, and mutually respectful at the conclusion of the story. PLUS......I, the reader, had almost as good a time as all the story characters. Rest assured this story will find a spot in my "read again file." Thanks very much.

Pulsifer42

Trite, clumsy dialog, an only notionally believable storyline, and if they were all so dedicated to one another, including Jeannie having to stop having sex with anyone except them because they were afraid of STD's, what happened to that dedication when they decided that Annette, a complete stranger, should join them; did the fact that she was a complete stranger somehow prove she didn't carry any STD's?

Illogical, irritating, and repetitively dull.

This is one of the best stories I have read in a long time. Thanks