All Comments on 'Family is Not Blood Ch. 03'

that is romance of the lowest kind

I found some things hard to take but I have seem so many things couples have done to each other.I do feel he is just as required to pay support on freedie as the father it was his action that made the child. So he is in sence his the father they were using bith control. And I can see them reconecting . Good job . Dagoatmandavid said it C ya later

When I first started following this story, I was very unsure I would continue.

Something about it................, I think the continual refererence to the polish community and family, made me want to follow it further. I am glad I did, it is developing a good plot.

Hang in their, only cowardly, spineless, anonymous WIMPs make insulting comments!!!

Consider what you hear from them as nothing more than a rude person passing gas in a crowded elevator.

Thank you for your gift,

SliperyRox

For sharing.

I'm not going to be a ble to finish this series. One, the dialogue is very dry. Two, you have the cheating wife talking about them sharing with others after they get back together. Really? Wasn't it her sharing that got them into trouble in the first place?

PUT YOUR WIMP SHIT WHERE IT BELONGS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I've read hundreds of stories on this site where a previously loyal, ethical, intelligent wife suddenly turns into the whore from hell. Gang banging at biker bars, cuckolding the loyal loving hubby, and totally abandoning her children, family, and friends. And we just say, Burn The Bitch! So why is it so hard to imagine the reverse scenario, where the bitch grows up, accepts responsibility, seeks to redeem herself, heal who she injured? Fortunately, the good wife turned harlot bitch is pretty rare in my experience, but that does not make those stories less interesting. The whore seeking redemption is vary rare on this sight, and I like this positive tale. Thank you for exploring not only evil, but the power of good to vanquish evil. It is poignant that much of the good energy springs from and is centered around the birth of a child. Merry Christmas!

WHAT???

Sure time has passed, and its clear to all that she has grown up and matured, but i still just dont see a reconciliation after she cheated for 3 years

I have to admit that a discussion of this length and depth would have been impossible with the couple we met in the first chapter. Still people can change and they are often conflicted about what they are doing. A point that I think I understand now is that the

asshole was probably her adulterous fuck buddy before Mike came into her life and was not a sudden break on her part. Still it sounds foolish to get back together with her.

She's been screwing someone else since before they were married, kept it up with no intention of stopping, had the assholes kid, and lied to him right up to the point of being confronted with undisputable proof and now because she's somewhat changed he's considering taking her back? How could someone be so brain dead to think that she won't consider doing it again? Just because she's seen a little of life's reality that she can be trusted? Don't be suckered in.

Thanks for a well written and interesting story BUT I have to agree with anonymous 5/09/16 and his "I don't think so" comment. This woman is not worthy of reconciliation or even friendship after all that she did to him. Change or no change.

You shouldn't have dug the hole so deep. And this guys actions and reactions are wishful thinking at the absolute best. Where is his anger?

Too much thinking and not enough feeling.

When I saw that he was going tot ake the slut back I lost interest. It's not real. No one gives such a turn in her life, As some other commenters pointed out you put their marriage into some of the worst cases scenarios. There is no way back from there.

She didn't even do counseling or anything. Sorry. Well written, but plain stupid.

How does this stuff get rated so high?

Painful brain injury?

The LIT admins falsify the scores, by deleting 1-votes every so often for writers who ask for the service. This means, of course, that stories that have a disproportionate number of 1-votes, that is, the very worst stories at the bottom of the barrel, are also disproportionately pushed to the top of the scoring system.

When you want to write a believable reconciliation, not a RAAC, you need to stay away from the worst cheating scenario. I'm sorry to say this is one of them.

There is no way back from what she did.

There is a difference between taking the high road and becoming a wimp. You did the second. Like others said I lost interest because everything from here is just sparkling fairydust over them and say some magic words to get them back together.

Sorry but you derailed the story here.

PS. Anon before me. Thanks for explaning the unfair scoring system. That explains a lot about some lame stories who are highly overrrated.

Just like that, after one conversation with her, he is willing to be with her again. I love a good redemption story but this is not one. Her reasoning for what she did to him was pathetic and considering how long she did it for, shows how evil and selfish she is. I guess she is lucky her ex is a wimp.

Sorry this was unreadable. Very very bad... completely unbelievable. This not romance btw it's LW through and through. If you want to write a believable reconciliation tale forget about presenting worse case scenario like you did in part 1. You also need to show what steps tool the cheating wife to change herself. It's laughable when a woman who cheated (and shitted) on her husband suddenly becomes Mother Therese. Most likely scenario she will be fucking anything with a cock to raise money to pay the bills. She was already a slut with no love or respect for her husband. People like her do not change. Read Requital by Longhorn07 or Between the pages of adultery by laptopwriter. Those are believable reconciliation tales. Yours was a disgusting RAAC, Negative stars if I could

3stars. Yech! Pronoun errors, bad syntax, stupid completely unreal contrived plot. I have a policy: I finish every story or series, to give the author a chance. The MC would have to be a saint. This isn't even a "cuck" story. It's just a sad, stupid waste of words. I am so sorry that the time I spend on this SCHLOCK will never be recovered.

you lost me. Forgiveness is one thing, but...

This is simply ludicrous. Forgiveness and moving on? Fine. If you want a reconciliation that is remotely believable post divorce, then make thr cheating not be so heinous. Her betrayal wad massive. Wasn't just cheating with her (unknowingly) half-brother, it was her adamant refusal to do anything beyond vanilla sex while saving all those for her illicit lover and doing so happily with intent, and worse it went on thr entries time they were engaged and married and was repeated over and over. She had zero restraints. Zeor plans to stop. Zero remorse until well after the baby shower burn and talks with her father, Fred (non biological). She bought into Rita's hateful bull-snot hook, line, and sinker. She got pregnant with Corey's child because hubby messed with the condoms. Corey was coming over regularly. Used up condoms and drinking his beer. Cathy was an idiot. Hubby was ab idiot. Staying with her till the shower was moronic. She knew for years that Rita was banging Paul. Her betrayal was simply massive. And yet author will reconcile them. Time to get off this spiraling out of control train(wreck). Ick

Excellent story so far with these three last chapter. I take it you're Polish? Anyway, thanks. Now a Follower! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!