All Comments on 'Family Lessons in Lust Ch. 04'

Eroticism it is not, while you have all the attributes to be a good writer, please edit your stories carefully,

also use a bit more finesse, it will make a better read.

Erotic stories are so much better, than stroke stories, yet that is only my opinion. Sorry.

...apologize...if that is really how you feal...Yeah it might be a little heavy handed, and OK it reads more like a slam bang fuck vid. Sometimes though...you want it rough and hard and UNsubtle. This one works for me on that level just fine...