All Comments on 'Family Road Trip Ch. 01'

This is NOT a sentence. It's a paragraph!

"As I looked her over I saw that she had grown a few inches taller she must have been 5'6 or so and, she had long sexy legs which I followed all the way up to her short black miniskirt past her curvy swaying hips and up to her flat sexy stomach which was clearly visible since she had tied her shirt up in a knot just above her belly button."

WTF? Are you 8?

Fantastic hot sexy start.

Good start, even though undressing someone as they drive down a highways is both improbable and dangerous! also, would have liked a little back story as to why these two would be open to sexual activity. Gave ya 5 stars anyway.

car scene seemed a bit much, but sexy. i'll read chapter 2

Good, keep going. (Pls)

have a fatal car wreck when he was undressing her as she drove?

looking forward 2 reading chapter 2

That older sister is really dirty. Great stuff!!

can't wait til they're all crammed in a car together!

the whole stripping in the car and driving nude bit was way to stupid and totally unrealistic i stopped there it wasn't worth finishing this part was so bad the rest couldn't be any better

It was fast, but it was hot! Looking forward to the road trip, and him getting both sisters. Please hurry.

want more. keep going with the big sister and brother.than the little sister and brother than the 2 sisters,than all three of them at the same time

I think about 20 more chapters, ASAP, should do it! Great work!

Can't wait for more!

Thanks for writing!

Sexmate

Please finish the story

Very good start, hope you continue. Can't wait for both sisters to get in on the act!