All Comments on 'Family Ties Ch. 09'

you have too many spelling errors that distract from a wonderful and imaginative story.

Penus, virginia, nother etc.

Very good series, Although last chapters a bit of a shock. Domwoolf will you be continuing, I sincerely hope you do.

awesome please keep it coming

owsome story i m anxiously waiting for the next part

Great Series ! PLease continue with your saga. It is to well written to stop now. Onward, Onward, and Continue!

That was a fantastic and sometimes sad story but also happy one in that I wish I had women subservient to me. Is there any more to this great story?

This is not the kind of series I normally read but became fanasitated with it . I know it has been a while since you have written on it but I hope that you will pick it back up an continue it further . Multiple 5*****s for the series .

Thanks again

TX CRACKER

Could you continue the story line please. It's very interesting and I would like to read what becomes of the family business and the siblings also.

I hope you keep it going

I hope you continue this series. And see how the older sister moves on there. Not to mention how the father and grandfather deal with their decisions. There was apart of the main character said that family is important. And the others chose the business end while forsaking family. That's a shame the father forgot his own words. And was willing to offer up his own daughter for their business. Be nice to see him put in his place.

I doubt many will see this given how old the story is now but I hated the ending it started out as simple consensual BDSM but them turned into true horor when the supposed it’s all consensual father forces his oldest daughter to go to that school knowing she will be forcibly assaulted and sexually assaulted. if I was the son I would have as the head of the family made the father and grandfather pay for the sisters mistake knowing she had no say in her entire life being forced into that school and then job. Then again I usually hate BDSM so it is probably just not for me.

Great story but you left all of your readers at the edge of the cliff and it's been years! That's dirty! One thing I would like to see is longer chapters but the most impotent thing I want is FOR YOU TO FINISH THE DAMN STORY! Or at least give us a better ending than that! That sucks bro, I feel completely cheated!

Between chapters 6 and 7 the plot takes quite a turn with no warning and it isn't until chapter 8 that it becomes clear this isn't a brand new story with the same title. I can see the plot development after reading to the end, but a few clues there would have been nice.

An EXCELLENT scenario, that is slightly confusing at times and appears to be incomplete.

Whilst I have awarded 5stars to each of the sections, there are some serious flaws in the spelling and grammar throughout all chapters. Please check in a dictionary the proper meanings and spelling of the words you use, for instance 'dominant', noun, is the position of being in charge (the dominant partner), 'dominate', verb, is the action of a dominant, a dominant person dominates a submissive person.