All Comments on 'Family Vacation'

You sure know how to write a hot story. I would love to have you be my daughter. You caused my cock to stand up tall and proud.

I will be reading more of your work

What could be hotter! It was a pleasure to read! Great description and blow by blow detail!

Thanks for writing!

Loaded with errors. You don't seem to know the difference between "then" and "than," "wonder" and "wander," "there" and "their." To you and all those who criticize this kind of criticism, it is like knowing music well and hearing bad note after bad note. It is distracting and shows a disinterest in your readers.

I have read alot of erotic stories. This one is one of the best I've ever read. I couldn't keep my hands off my cock the whole time. Thank you for a wonderfully sexually pleasing story. Can't wait to read more from you.

A well written and enticingly erotic story line that had a part of me giving you a standing ovation... and wanting more.

Ciao,

Impossible to read if you have any familiarity with the English language. The mistakes just continually got in the way of the plot.