by BrightCatsEyes
I didn't read the first chapter, because I read only lesbian stories. The second chapter is really good, and I don't know any way that it could be made better. I look forward to reading more about Jenny and Pru, and possibly some of their girl friends.
What an awesome, well-written, erotic-as-hell story. One of the best I've ever read. Definitely written for women.
I really liked this story, both parts. The pacing is slow, delicious and absolutely perfect in all steps of discovery. I hope to read more; please keep Jenny and Pru going. Maybe bring one of their Daddies in? ... That's my own preference, but I hope to read more of your quality writing,
Indao