by Ksennin
Not a bad read, but too wordy. I kept hoping for Sue/Johnny, and was disappointed it never came.
Great stuff! Hope you write more like it with Marvel damsels being "possessed" like Susan described, though really enjoying the sex with the villains. And maybe some of the female villains seducing and corrupting the male heroes.
Terrific stuff, buddy. Keep it cuming.
I've been looking for some FF erotica for a while and so far no luck finding good stories.
This story is incredible, and Sue having sex with villains was out of this world!
Keep up the good work!
PS: If someone knows good stories like this one about Sue being a slut, I would appreciate it if you send me a mail. kakashi524 at gmail dot com
As a huge Sue Storm fan, I love this to bits and would love for you to continue the tale. More please!
A perfect demonstration that when it comes to achieving true scientific rigor, sample size matters.
Great story. Always loved your stuff, glad to see you posting here.
Decent (no pun intended) portrayal of Reed.
You make a damn good point that if Sue masturbates using her force field constructs, she wouldn't be able to focus enough to make it all the way through orgasm. Similarly - Ben Grimm can't feel having his cock sucked, not something most writers would've thought to include.