by Leatris
I am copy pasting an earlier comment.
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Tim413 - over 8 years ago
What a great first submission.
Hot story. I hope more chapters are coming.
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Loved it, well written this is the way a relationship should be honest and open.
Fine writing, & erotic. Meandering, Leatris....you are a tease. HB999
What an excellent story, please continue to write and expand on this story or perhaps right another story line!!! This story rocked!!! my world!!!
Very sensual story with descriptive writing, left me wanting more.