All Comments on 'Fantasy Sex Cruise 07'

Please add Linda's story and then, continue with Lauren, Kealani and Linda together as a completed package.

Great story!!!

Please share Linda's cruise experience with us. Then let us see how they use they're individual experiences to to change each others lives and their shared life. It's been so great reading about these three and how they've almost melted together. I can't wait to see what Linda's week has done to her and what 'tomorrow' will bring for them.

This story needs to be continued! Since I read the first chapter I have been looking forward to reading about Linda and her adventure. After that you will need to follow with the story of their reunion and future. Thanks for a very enjoyable read!

It would be great to see this continue. I agree with the other comments about finding out about Linda story that would have run alongside Eddys.

Also a story line that happens after Eddy and Linda get home from their prospective cruises. Also maybe a what happens to Lauren, then bringing it all together.

This has massive potential, so please continue.

all the way through

I would love to read about Linda and then how she and Eddie process what they have experienced.

Just a phenomenal story. I want to hear about Linda's cruise, but I also can't wait to hear what happens when Eddu gets back with Linda. You write in a way that makes us care about all of the characters.

I would love to see you continue the story!

Love what you have written, very well done!

Would love to hear about Linda's cruise and then a third section on what happens after!

I look forward to more about Linda's experience and how they reunite, or about anything else that you care to write.

Loved every detail. Love your writing. Well done. Thank you. Please write more.

PLEASE... Yes please write more. Linda's cruise and Eddy and Linda's rebirth together. Whatever... just write more.

yes, please write more!

But I don't know if I can take 8 more chapters of 5 page stories /wink/.

Yes! We really need to know Linda's story and then the rest of the story as they return home together. Great Read.

Been captivated from the start, please write about Linda. This series has been thought provoking as well for me, similar age, similar position. Been a real good read, and made me think about what to do to change my situation. A big thank you.

Wonderfully written story. I enjoyed it immensely. I look forward to more. Thanks

really enjoyed the story so far and need more

All 7 chapters built very well on each other. Please continue the series. Linda's adventure or a follow up cruise would be great.

Would definitely like to see how Linda's cruise went.

One of the best Literotica stories I've read. You are a fine writer and have a gift for blending hot descriptions of creative sex with the deeper emotional and spiritual aspects of lovemaking. As I read farther into it, the story very gracefully led me from a tale of mere sexual play and fun, to one of emotional connection, to the deepest reaches of love. It resonated with my own single life experience of this rare gift. Thank you for the beautiful telling of this magical and extraordinary human experience. If you continue it, I'll be interested to see how the characters integrate the experience, particularly what it means for Eddy and Linda's marriage.

Yes, let's hear Linda's Story then a combination of everybody in the end.

Please give us Linda's trip then continue the story. Excellent story.

You need to finish the story you did great on your other one with a Great ending why not this one???

There are simply no words capable of expressing the beauty of this story.

Yes, I would most definitely LOVE to hear the story of Linda's Cruise, then I would LOVE to hear the story of their re-joining and what happens in the future of both Kealani and Laura.

I would love to hear Linda's story and I see you have started to tease us with the first chapter of that but, despite the common origin, that is a whole new story. What I really want to hear is what happens afterwards.

Great writing style and well crafted story. Keep going please.

Unbelievably great story. So well written. Please, please, please finish the series. I can't wait to hear about Linda's cruise and what happens to Eddy, Kealani, Lauren, and Linda ( and the couple she meets) after the cruise ends.

One of the best here. ******

just wow

Chapter 7 in this ongoing story is highlighted by an intriguing plot and good character development. Five stars.

I am going to say some thing that I pray you do not take offense to. I checked your biography, and it says that you are male. In the writing of the story with all of the emotions, the way that you describe things, it is as if it was a female author writing this.

As I said, I mean this, totally as a compliment, as it was written, so beautifully, and with such compassion and passion, that I was totally enraptured by your story. I am so looking forward to reading the next section about Linda‘s story, and then the culmination of the two of them coming together again.

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.