by JukeboxEMCSA
I know this one’s a little older but it’s such an incredible and hot premise. I’d love to read a sequel where they bring in a third girl, maybe a friend or a sister. Either way, so so good!
This story made me happy. It had a happy, mindless, orgasmic start. A sensual and mindless hypnotic middle, and an extremely happy, mindless and love filled ending (which was obviously the beginning). Thank you so much.
Fuck! That was one of the hottest fantasies I have read in years. Your talent for escalating a story is becoming legendary.
I love your mind control stories <3 This one was especially sweet and oh so sexy.
I am concerned about how these two stopped undoing their suggestions, or even stopped putting an undo into things. Everything from not having an "end trigger" for the "bra makes you feel sweaty" to "not undoing the stay on your knee" (all this will make the next day problematic) to the whole change in relationship.
These two are going to have an interesting future.
I have been a big fan of your well written and strongly erotic stories for many years. I can't, for the life of me, figure out how I never read this one. It was amazing! I echo all the great aspects of the story described by previous comments. I enjoyed, too, the length of the story. Many of your stories are a shorter read, but I felt like I could slowly luxuriate in this story, like taking a warm bubble bath. It played out in both a sexy and plausible progression, a combination that adds to the eroticism for me. Thank you and here's to more "luxuriating" stories to come.
This story is the best hypnosis erotica I've read. The build up is flawless, and the description is the crystal is insightful but not too wordy. Thanks for writing this.
I read this story years ago and forgot to favorite. Ever since then I've been searching for this story. god im happy I found it again. Still hot as fuck. Just as good as I remembered.
One of the best stories I’ve read in a long time. Great build up. Thank you for sharing it with us.
This is a step above, seriously you're already one of my favourite authors but between the way this explores being both sides of the relationship AND the deliciously wholesome ending that makes the heart flutter, not to mention all the wonderful sexiness in between, I genuinely think this is the best short story on the site.
I mean, what a great gem. An incredibly hot mind control story where both sides are controlled and neither uses the ability for evil/assholery. 5/5 One of the best
Just found this story. I echo others sentiments when I say I’m desperate for a sequel! Such a talented story teller
This is one of those captivating stories that my mind uses as a seed for an endless game of what if she thought to do this? Really got the difference between the mind orgasm and the physical orgasm. This is one I came back to revisit.
This was a fantastic story, you're honestly my favorite writer
Sweet and hot and kinky, this wonderful little tale desperately needs a follow-up.
This story is amazing! Please make another one like this. It made me so wet and I had to fight the urge to masturbate. Just imaging what would happen next was so hot
shit, that was far too enjoyable, spesh as im lying next to my bf in bed wanting to get off bad. ahem! good job :P
In my opinion you made the crystal a little to powerful, if something is able to give someone orgasm on top of orgasm that are completely mind blowing than any regular sex would become completely mundane and uninteresting. The girls would have no reason to have sex with each other at that point.
very good story, even if i'm still trying to figure out how i feel about it...
Super hot, a great mix of the mind control and lesbian sex genres (really well written, too).
Was high when reading this. Sweet story to read while stoned. It's a nice, hot, short PWP that I'd read again. High or sober.
I've been reading your stories here and at EMCSA for a long time, and this is your very best, a masterpiece of mutual seduction.