All Comments on 'Fashionably Late (For My Funeral) Pt. 04'

Drags on way too long. And, there must be close to ten-million former Seal members. Must of really been crowded in the water.

he does not have closure nor will he cease and desist. TK U MLJ LV NV

but with a second chance ....who knows....TK U MLJ LV NV

to worse you went from 4+ to -6 in one chapter totally trashed the story when they went to Colombia I'm done.

THE STORY WAS ACCURATE. THE JOURNEY...THE BUS RIDES....THE SHITTY ROADS....THE POLICE'S INVOLVEMENT....REMEMBER IF ONE WISHES TO FIND A QUESTION, THEY MUST START WITH AN ANSWER/PREMISE, tk u mlj lv nv

This story is great

This is just what they need for a money making film! Get Stallone...

The government only employs the most creative and dedicated resource s-

Hhhmmm...???

Too long: mixing third and first person narration rarely works - it spoilt the story here.

Too much, too far, too bad!

The story may well be unlikely, but it is entertaining.