All Comments on 'Fated Ch. 02'

No backstory?

Nothing?

Just gonna jump right into the wild and crazy times, eh?

Well fuck you this fails miserably, rating 0

If you read the beginning of Fated Ch. 01, the writer clearly tells you to read 'Investment' before reading this series! It tells you the whole background so then you know what this story is about! I love it so far! Well done WFEATHER!

This story has a lot of promise, but I hafve one question. How does the old lady on the street know that she is with someone who is "obviously" her brother? Do they have signs on their forehead? Do they look "that" much alike? That's one thing that's not explained....

There is little to no dialogue.

...damn short on the length of the chapters so far.

keep it up and 5 stars.