All Comments on 'Fated Ch. 36'

You just keep on writing & we will just keep on reading this story.! Read my 'lips' DO NOT STOP THIS STORY.!!! Glad we got that out of the way.!! Great story as always with the young/ones and enjoy every word you write.! Thank: WF

your stories suck, 36X's. Give it up at 0

I like the day in the life scenes and the short chapters. Can you use their names more? Constantly referring to him as "my big brother" is kinda weird. It makes it seem like she has a hero worship issue rather than seeing him as an independent person who also happens to be her sibling.

The story hasnt developed much but anyway nice job still ad 5 stars.