All Comments on 'Father and Son Take a Slave'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Ahh it started good..

I normally like incest but I feel it ruined this piece, it started off great for me but I think the son should have the slave girl to himself instead of sharing it?!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
"one hand pinching her nipple, the other three fingers deep inside of her drenched hole."

What strange size hands she has. Did you mean one hand pinching a nipple while the other played on her hole? I am figuring her thumb and finger working her nubbin, bean, or clit. The other three entering her hole.

Other than those two errors this for me was perfect!!!!

ham_sandwichham_sandwichover 9 years ago
"she lowerered her head into his mouth?"

You mean, "she lowered his head (of his penis) into her mouth," right?

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