by OhMissScarlett
This is magnificent! The historical detail is flawless and perfectly sustained, with neither overelaboration nor awkwardness, so that though we're in the midst of the colourful scene all the time, they come across as people not pictures. Very sexy in a modern way, yet exactly right for the time too. I've rarely seen historical fiction that's so fully immersed and believable.
Without using the words "cock" or "cunnilingus", you have written a wonderful story, T. As always. I know the next one will be even better, but I love this Renaissance genre of yours. Looking forward to your next...
Wow, have you improved as an author. Transport us with more beautiful adventures.Love you. M
I loved your story and can only wish she was to take them in double penetration. Is it in your plan?
In response to the previous anonymous feedback-Yes, it is in my plans to include a double penetration scene in the second part to this story, which will probably be posted in a month's time. The follow-up is tentatively called "Lady Margaret's Sketchbook" and will involve The Duseks' visit to the royal palace of Emperor Maximilian I. Thanks so much for all the wonderful feedback! -Miss Scarlett
Read it again, liked it more. We breathlessly await chapter 2 to discover what new vices will you invent for these decadent yet rather innocent characters. Love you...C
I hope that that makes you happy, Ms. Scarlett ;) You did ask.
Now seriously - how delicious, sumptuous, erotic, and decadent. The title truly says it all. Your beautiful use of language and intensely sensual sexual imagery drive home a truly exquisite tale. I shall return to this one often!
This was good. Very good! If you liked it, read the next episode too. If I get it right, you can find that at: [url]http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=151235&page=1[/url]
Miss S tells me there'll be another one as well, so keep coming back until it arrives!
I read this story about a year ago, then misplaced the link. I've been looking for it since. It's so wonderful. They're everything I like to see in a threesome. The characters are amazing and endearing, the way they interact and how incredibly hot they are, it's all so, so wonderful. I'm just a little bit obsessed. ^_^;
I think I fell in love with the characters in this story. *sigh* If only...