All Comments on 'Feast or Famine? Ch. 09'

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windstormywindstormyover 18 years ago
Okay, Athena....

Next chapter? I'm hanging on a thread here to know what comes next. What a spellbinding story you keep going on with. I'm about to have a tantrum. Lol. j/k.

I enjoyed it. And I'm so very interested to know what happens next.

dcraigdcraigover 18 years ago
Ahh......

I am dreamy-eyed by the coupling of Koyla and Natalya. It was so very smooth and flowed so sweetly. The suspense of the conflict formed by Stephanos' actions toward Marianna made it all the better. And Pyotr...That poor sweet innocent that still lingers in the balance must survive now. He must...

DGentleBenDGentleBenover 18 years ago
Wow....

So, Kolya had a wife at one time? That is a surprise to me. And a very good one, too. I really liked the love scene involving Kolya and his late wife. That was very good, Marie. Do you have some more scenes like that one? I guess I need to get to reading don't I? :)

Doug LewisDoug Lewisover 18 years ago
Good Stuff...

Awesome idea to throw in the love scene with Kolya and his former wife's ghost. Very interesting and clinching there. But Stephanos is obviously unnerved a little. Hope he gets his head together again, soon. He keeps messing up with Marianna and she might try to fly the coup.

spiritwalkerspiritwalkerover 18 years ago
More, hon...

All you have done is further starve me by tossing out such sparce bait. But your efforts are not in vain, for I am famished to know the next events to come.

Leeches at that...*shudder*...Those slimy little blood suckers, I hope they didn't suck up all of Luka's blood that was meant to help Pyotr. Lol... And I'm sure they didn't. By the time she returned with them, his blood probably had done what it was meant to do. Just the effects of it is slowly manifesting itself.

Also loved the fact that you had the vampires use a little doctor sense in placing Kolya in the same bed with Pyotr. It has been rumored that that will affect those of weakening illnesses and catatosis. Good job, Marie.

Oh, and I also enjoyed the love scene. Hope you write a few more before this story is done.

moffettasweetmoffettasweetover 18 years ago
Ditto...Ditto...Ditto...

I'm so excited to see Kolya getting all this lovin. Hmmm...Mmm...He deserves it, too. It always seems the servants get the raw end of the stick. But not this guy. His patience wins out overall. Very good, Ri!!!

sweeteric2u2sweeteric2u2over 18 years ago
can't get enough....

You are killing me, keepin us in the dark like this, Marie. hehehe...

Love this chapter! I was just all into Stephanos being so wrapped up and Marianna just bent on proving him wrong. You go girl! And Nadia prodding Luka to straighten his ass out, that was good. Love these women in this!

And what an awesome love scene! I was almost in tears about that! I can imagine how wonderful that was for poor Kolya after so long. He missed her so much, I'm sure. And that was a good surprise for him.

Bring it on, Marie! When do Stephanos and Luka talk about Danjela? I'm dyin to know!!!!!!

mastergary4u2mastergary4u2over 18 years ago
Good Stuff...

I am enjoying this story as a whole. I really enjoyed the little outbreaks in this chapter. It made the Vamps a little more human to me. The girls are holding true to their nature. And doing an outstanding job of keeping tight reigns on the men.hehehe...

I do hope Pyotr pulls through soon. And Kolya too. He really got some good payback in the love scene. A long time needed, coming, and warrented. Hope to see some more lovin stuff in this before it's over.

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