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Why this "writer" is submitting stuff to this website is a total mystery. Don't waste your time reading this.

Dear Anonymous....why did you read it?

Please share information on where we can see what you've written so we can read your work.

It's easy to leave negative comments, quite another thing to actually produce something on your own.

Let's see what an "Anonymous" person can produce.

Bo.....

do us all a favour and take a flying leap over a clif head first.

Dear Anonymous....I believe you should first learn to spell before commenting or writing. Neither appears to be your forte'.....thanks for sharing your views.

I liked your replies to critics Bo. Assholes called Anonymous who comment stupidly deserve retaliation for their snide writing. You defended yourself appropriately. Your stupid antagonists ought to hang their heads in shame but probably are shameless. Literotica should limit all feedback comment to registered persons and require use of registered name when commenting. Keep on with your vivid writing Bo. Perhaps you could look at shortening stretches of dialogue and attributing more thoughts and focused expression of feelings to your principal characters. I exhibit similar weakness at times.

Egmont,

Thanks for your support. With respect to this writing, I write them when I feel a need for written sexual expression and I do so quickly without spending a lot of time on craft so I know that I could polish them more and more. However, once the story's done this way it's like after an orgasm....you want to have a coke and a cigarette, lol, and not work on it any more for a while! Just kidding but that's partly true also. As any author I'm used to criticism but from people with names, people who can spell, people who are literate enough to actually know what they are talking about. Cheap shot artists are just that, shallow cheap shots.

I'm actually a writer of fiction mystery novels and a play and have won a couple short story contests but do this for pure fun.

Where can I read some of your work?

Bo, the Jerks on this site cluster mostly around Loving Wives and Interracial. Stick a mystery-romance into Romance or a longer one into Novels and Novella if you wish to be read by more couth and literary-minded readers, although some there can be precocious nitpickers. EG

I rated it 1*.

I like that this pretentious ass actually thinks he has produced something with this garbage.

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