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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wow

Unique and for all the tech, the characters rang so true.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Awesome

Gives new meaning to the phrase "go fuck yourself."

SmittyNZSmittyNZalmost 10 years ago
Excellent!

Very enjoyable! It'd be awesome to see this get a sequel as it doesn't feel like it ends - no reflection on the emotional content for Candi, or the hot sex with the two surros.

Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great Work

Not only did I cum, but I also got weirdly into the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Wow!

This brilliance deserves a sequel! Love the Sci-fi futa action! Wow!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Awesome story

Gave it 5 stars, I also hope you write a sequel. Just read your first story last week about the general have to say your writing is great so far. Hot but also surprisingly strong on plot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Loved the twist

Hope you consider a sequel to this. Would love to see what Grace has planned for when the other surrogate arrives.

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