All Comments on 'Feldare Tales: A Dark and Stormy Knight'

by mack_the_knife

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
At Last!!!

I was beginning to fear that you had forgotten about your wonderful feldare series all together.

Thank you for proving me wrong

KatLadyKatLadyover 18 years ago
Great but sad tale

I had hoped that things would turn out happy for Gavin/Arviel and Nadia but unfortunately, they didn't. I liked them together. I only hope Nadia finds love.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
The tale that brought tears

Thanks for leaving me with tears in my eyes. I liked the story but I really didn't like the ending. I really fell in love with Nadia and Gavin but it was horrible that you turned Gavin into that evil crature. And it didn't help that you denied Nadia the love that she had with Gavin. And now she is alone, left a bit damaged and heartbroken. Guess I like happy endings better....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Keep Writing

Very good story. It reminded me of stories I've read by Wies and Jordan.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Sad...

A really powerful story, really amazing. Sad about the end though but still you crafted one of the most compelling stories I've ever read here.

DsRiceDsRiceabout 8 years ago
Flawless

This story single-handedly inspired me to start writing my own erotic fiction.

Thank you.

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