by mack_the_knife
I was beginning to fear that you had forgotten about your wonderful feldare series all together.
Thank you for proving me wrong
I had hoped that things would turn out happy for Gavin/Arviel and Nadia but unfortunately, they didn't. I liked them together. I only hope Nadia finds love.
Thanks for leaving me with tears in my eyes. I liked the story but I really didn't like the ending. I really fell in love with Nadia and Gavin but it was horrible that you turned Gavin into that evil crature. And it didn't help that you denied Nadia the love that she had with Gavin. And now she is alone, left a bit damaged and heartbroken. Guess I like happy endings better....
Very good story. It reminded me of stories I've read by Wies and Jordan.
A really powerful story, really amazing. Sad about the end though but still you crafted one of the most compelling stories I've ever read here.
This story single-handedly inspired me to start writing my own erotic fiction.
Thank you.